How Isaac Newton’s Law of Physics Applies to Writing
By Linda Yezak
He eyed her from head
to toe.
She hit him.
He smirked.
She thought he called
her a name.
Sounds like a scene
from a novel, doesn't it? In truth, these lines are derived from different
novels in which the author presented an unanswered action, violating a major
law of physics:
Every action has an equal and opposite
reaction.
This, the third of Sir
Isaac Newton's laws, should be the first law of writing. Whenever a character
does something, unless he's alone in the scene (and sometimes even then), there
should be some sort of reaction.
The examples I've given
were derived from novels I've read where the author left me hanging after an
action was portrayed. The first one, especially, yanked me out of the story:
"He eyed her from head to toe." Since we were in her POV, we
should've seen her reaction (even if we weren't in her POV). Believe me, a
woman reacts to being scoped, and how this one reacted could've solidified her
characterization. The author missed an opportunity.
The next one, "She
hit him," surprised me because she hit him hard in the legs with a metal
object. At the very least, he should've said "ouch." He should've
jumped up and down, holding one injured shin, then the other. He should've exclaimed
something—anything—that would indicate pain.
Should have … but didn't.
Pay attention to what
you're writing. Picture your scene and the natural reactions your characters
should have to the stimulus presented—in a natural sequence. I emphasize the
sequence because I've also seen something similar to this:
She
whacked him on the back with the board she toted. She didn't mean to, she just
wasn't paying attention. When would she ever learn? She was so careless, such a
klutz. Even her mother said so. What would her mother say if she saw her today?
Nothing good, no doubt.
"Ouch,"
he said.
Oversimplified of
course, but it happens when writers aren't paying attention to what they put on
the page. It may seem odd that an author wouldn't realize what she's writing,
but if she's overanxious about getting to her next point or presenting a vital
character quirk or whatever goal is on her mind, she's blinded to what she has
written.
Among the rules of
writing, don't overlook a couple of obvious ones:
- Every action has a reaction.
- Pay attention to what you're doing.
Have you ever read
something that pulled you out of the story? Have suggestions? We would love to
hear from you.
(Photo courtesy of FreeDigitalPhotos.net and Stuart Miles.)
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Linda W. Yezak lives with her husband and their funky feline,
PB, in Texas, where tall tales abound and exaggeration is an art form. She has
a deep and abiding love for her Lord, her family, and salted caramel. And
coffee—with a caramel creamer. Author of award-winning books and short stories,
she didn't begin writing professionally until she turned fifty. Taking on a new
career every half century is a good thing.
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Thanks for the opportunity to share with your readers, Andrea! God bless!
ReplyDeleteSuch good info, Linda. Thanks for sharing your expertise with our readers. Blessings! :)
DeleteGreat article. The title drew me in!! I'll definitely be thinking of Newton's law when writing.
ReplyDeleteGlad you liked the article, Deborah. Thank you for your comment.
DeleteI agree, Deborah. The title is definitely intriguing. Thanks for stopping by and sharing your thoughts. Blessings! :)
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