Monday, September 19, 2016

You Know You're a Writer When ...

By Andrea Merrell

“Hello, my name is Andrea Merrell, and I am a writer.”

Sounds like a simple statement, but it took me a long time before I had the courage to say it out loud, especially with confidence.

When you’re called to write, you know it. Or, as my grandmother used to say, “You know that you know that you know. You know it in your knower.” But even when we have that assurance, we sometimes feel we have to earn the title. We set high standards and unreachable goals for ourselves, and we constantly compare ourselves with others. It’s easy to feel like we just haven’t done enough to make it so.

One author writes, “When I was sixteen, I knew I wanted to be a writer. It took thirty years before I introduced myself as a writer for the first time because I wasn’t sure I had done enough to earn that title. Between sixteen and forty-six, occasionally, I was a writer, but I felt like a failure because I didn’t write often enough, didn’t read enough, didn’t sacrifice sleep enough, and didn’t juggle my life with enough finesse to produce bylines and fans.” **

Can you relate? Do you see yourself in this writer’s words? Are you struggling to hit the mark and discover your calling as a writer?

I’m certainly not Jeff Foxworthy—and I promise we won’t talk about rednecks—but let’s look at a few things that will help you define your calling so that you can say with absolute assurance, “I am a writer.”

You just might be a writer if:

  • You wake up in the morning thinking about writing.
  • You go to bed at night thinking about writing.
  • You think about writing all during the day.
  • You wake up in the middle of the night with a brilliant idea for a blog post.
  • You can’t read a book or watch a movie without getting inspired.
  • You get excited when something bad happens, and you can use it as a scene.
  • You think about your characters and have conversations with them in your head.
  • You take tragic events and turn them into devotions.
  • You go to the mall—or Walmart—and look for weird people to put in your story.
  • You get angry at someone and plan to kill them off in your next novel.
  • And last—but certainly not least—you write because you can’t not write. (Not the best way to say it, but you get the point.)

Do you fit into any or all of these categories? Then you, my friend, are a writer.
Whatever God has called you to write (devotions, articles, blog posts, novels, or Bible studies), step out in faith, be confident in your calling, and do what you were born to do. Don’t compare yourself with anyone or let discouragement and rejection letters derail you. And don’t worry about being qualified. God does not call the equipped … He equips the called.

Having your name on the cover of a book does not make you a writer. Having a heart to share the words God places within you that will bless someone else … that’s what makes you a writer.

** Excerpt taken from The Mighty Pen: Christian Encouragement from Writers to Writers/Guilt Trips/Nicey Eller.)

(Photos courtesy of Miles/surasakiStock/Master Isolated Images.)


Monday, September 12, 2016

Don’t Dumb Down Your Readers: Write Smart

Today, we are very excited to have Vonda Skelton as our special guest. Be sure to leave a comment for her in the section below.

By Vonda Skelton

Readers are smart. They’re smart because they read. And if there’s one thing smart readers hate, it’s when writers treat them like they’re dumb.

One way writers dumb down their readers is by info-dumping. Check out these examples:

“When are things going to get back to the way they were before? Can you believe it’s been ten years since daddy left us?” Marsha turned from her sister and wiped a tear. “We had to move into public housing and go on food stamps. Then our brother died and Daddy never knew. And then you had to ago into rehab. It’s all his fault.”

Let’s be honest here, would we ever have a conversation like that with our siblings? I doubt it. After all, it’s simply a retelling of facts we would both already know. It’s dumping info onto the page for the perceived benefit of the reader. But our readers won’t appreciate the so-called benefit. They can see through our ruse. They know we’re taking the easy way out.

A good writer will bring those backstory details into the plot layer by layer, revealing facts and motivations through dialogue and POV (point of view) in a more subtle, natural delivery. One detail may come out on page five when Marsha stands in line behind someone with food stamps. Another might be revealed on page twenty-three when Marsha picks up her sister at rehab and they realize it’s been exactly ten years since their father left. Using this technique, your reader will be challenged and satisfied by putting together the pieces of the puzzle.

Another way to distance our readers is through unnecessary explanation. Ever read passages similar to these?

“I don’t care what you think!” Melanie yelled again. She wanted to be sure Jason had heard her.
Carly placed the rock on the gravestone and cried because she missed her mother so much.

In these two instances, the writer assumes the reader isn’t smart enough to figure out the characters’ motivations, so he or she writes out an additional explanation. But smart readers don’t appreciate the extra work the writer has done. Instead of being a help, it’s an insult to their reading intelligence. Well-written passages with well-developed characters don’t need explanation.

Treat your readers with respect and they’ll love you for it.

Write smart!

Vonda Skelton is an entertaining speaker who loves teaching about writing and speaking and the magic that happens when you marry the two. She is the author of four books, including Seeing Through the Lies: Unmasking the Myths Women Believe and the Bitsy Burroughs Mysteries for kids. Her third novel, Bitsy and the Mystery at Hilton Head Island, was nominated for a SIBA Book Award. Her articles have appeared in Christian and general market magazines. She is the Founder of Christian Communicators, a conference and organization dedicated to educating, validating, and launching women in their speaking ministries. Vonda is also owner of The Christian Writer’s Den writing blog and is a frequent instructor at writers’ conferences around the country. She’s currently working on a novel and screenplay. Vonda and Gary have been married all their lives—and they’re still happy about it! Visit Vonda at

(Photos courtesy of Miles/Marin/Photostock.)


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Thursday, September 8, 2016

The More You Know, The More You'll Save: Part VIII ~ Repetition

by Alycia W. Morales

As authors, we're always looking for ways to save money and time. This is the eighth post in a series that is meant to help you save both. On the front end, putting forth the effort to learn these points will cost you some time, but in the long run, it will save you money on professional edits.

Last week, we went over transitions. This week, we'll take a look at avoiding repetition. Personally, repetition is my biggest pet peeve as a reader.

Character Traits
When describing your character, let the reader know once, maybe twice throughout the story what color his eyes and hair are. It gets redundant to read that your hero has gazed into the heroine's chocolate brown eyes more than once or twice.

Which leads me to the next form of repetition...

First of all, avoid the cliche smile, sigh, and your favorite verb. You can use them a few times, but they shouldn't be your go-to. It can sometimes prove difficult to come up with something new for your character to do, but it is possible. Use a thesaurus, check out The Emotion Thesaurus by Angela Ackerman and Becca Puglisi, or ask a fellow writer what they suggest. But find a new way to say walk.

Please don't have your character staring up at the light-blue, fluffy clouds every time you mention clouds. And unless you're painting a mood picture, please don't make the car in the same scene light blue. Or his eyes. Watch out for repetitive adjectives (and adverbs, for that matter) throughout your novel.

Pet Words
Everyone has words they love to use over and over again in their writing. Just. Now. And (starting the sentence). But (again, starting the sentence). Sigh. Be sure you know yours, do a search in the document, and remove them.

Too often, as authors try to weave backstory into their novel, they end up repeating things as they build the story. Be aware of this and try to pick up where you left off in the weaving.

What is motivating your character? The reader should know that, but we don't need a constant reminder. Mix it up a little. Have the motivation consistent but expressed in varying ways.

This is one of my biggest pet peeves with repetition. Your reader doesn't want to know that your character is stuck in a mood pattern throughout your entire novel. If she's depressed in chapter one, she'd better be over it and moving on by chapter five. Or better yet, even sooner. This is why the character arc is so important. Your character needs to be growing and learning and changing throughout your story. If she's still stuck in the same depression in chapter fifteen as she was in chapter one, your reader isn't going to believe she will change by chapter twenty-four and the end of your book. Make your character grow. Challenge the moodiness she'd like to remain in.

This is just a short list of types of repetition used in writing. What others can you think of? Does repetition bother you as much as it does me? Let's talk! Feel free to leave a comment below.


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Monday, August 29, 2016

Why Every Writer Needs a Vision

By Andrea Merrell

As writers—especially Christian writers—we need to know the Bible is filled with Scriptures that talk about God speaking to His children through dreams and visions. In fact, Proverbs 29:18 (KJV) says, Where there is no vision, the people perish.

Let’s look a little closer and find out what that means for us as writers.

Some people look at this as mysterious, something that doesn’t happen in our modern society. Webster’s Collegiate Dictionary says it can be something seen in a dream or trance; a thought or concept formed in the imagination. But vision, simply put, is what can be rather than what is. Without vision—like that of Thomas Edison, Albert Schweitzer, Benjamin Franklin, and many others—we would not have advanced as a society to where we are today.

But what happens when you have a vision? You create a plan … a mission.


Webster’s defines mission as a pre-established and often self-imposed objective or purpose. Basically, your mission is a set of small, achievable goals that will propel you toward your vision. These goals are generally specific and measurable.

Setting Your Goals
The first step is knowing and being confident in your vision. What has God placed in your heart? What do you see yourself doing next year? Five years from now?

Once you’re confident in your vision, create your mission statement. Write the vision and make it plain (Habakkuk 2:2 NKJV). Sometimes, writing things down will solidify what’s in your mind and heart and give you a benchmark to focus on.

Do you have a vision? Maybe it’s:
  • Writing a devotion
  • Writing a best-selling novel
  • Winning a writing contest
  • Teaching a writing class
  • Attending a writers’ conference
  • Designing your own website
  • Speaking to students about writing
  • Traveling the world for inspiration

Whatever your vision—no matter how small or large—do you have a mission? Have you broken it down and created a set of bite-sized, achievable goals to get you there? If not, why not begin today.

If you don’t have a vision for your writing career, ask God to give you one. He will, I promise. And when He does, He will give you the wisdom, resources, and connections to get you to your God-given destiny.

(Photos courtesy of Miles/Sattva.) 


Monday, August 8, 2016

Critique Groups - How to Find the Perfect One for You

This month we welcome DiAnn Mills as our guest on The Write Editing. Thanks for joining us!

by DiAnn Mills     @DiAnnMills

Writers search for the best ways to receive helpful feedback for their manuscripts. We all desire to develop new skills by learning from those who know the craft. Face to face meetings offer an opportunity for the writer to reach professional goals. Meeting with a select group of writers who share the same joys and challenges inspires us to continue toward our goals.

Critique partners can help us define our manuscripts. But finding the personality and expertise with other writers is like searching for a new doctor. Not everyone is a good fit. A writer seeks those special people who have the same or advanced skills. To some writers, a critique group who writes in the same genre is helpful.

Critique partners who meet in person develop trust and share social time. Online critiquing help battle the time crunch. I’ve done both and understand the advantages and —the disadvantages.

If a situation no longer works for whatever reason, graciously resign from your commitment. A sense of responsibility is not a reason to continue in a relationship that no longer has value.

Establish a few ground rules with a potential critique group or partner so writers understand the expectations. Each member must be committed to the group and willing to give back.

Here are a few considerations:

• Will you and your partner(s) meet online or in a physical place?

• How many pages will be exchanged?

• How many writers will be in the group?

• Will the critiques be a line edit or a content edit?

• What will be the turnaround time?

• How will you handle a critique partner who fails to submit her work on a consistent basis

These guidelines will help ensure success for any critique groups. Merely tweak for the format that best suits the writers’ needs.

1. Determine how many writers in the group.

2. Establish a meeting place.

3. Establish manuscript format. 1-inch margins, Double Spacing, 12-point Times New Roman or New  Courier Font, Header with automatic page numbering

4. Establish length of submitted manuscript.

5. Automatically format the manuscript to number lines.

6. Members understand the manuscript’s contents and genre.

7. Submit polished writing as though each member is an editor.

8. Writer brings copies of manuscript for each participant.

9. Someone other than the writer reads the work aloud.

10. Writer is permitted two minute lead-in before work is read.

11. Writer does not speak during the reading.

12. Each writer is given 15 minutes of critique time.

13. It is inappropriate to interrupt.

14. Always thank the person who has given the critique.

15. Don’t take suggestions personally.

16. Ground rules for constructive criticism. Use the Oreo method. Begin with a compliment, make appropriate suggestions, close the critique with encouragement. Honesty is critical, but unkind remarks are forbidden. Harshness does not make a better writer.

17. Make specific suggestions. General comments do not help the writer.

18. Address punctuation, flow, content, and credibility.

19. Critique according to writer’s ability/level of expertise.

20. Each member of the group is responsible for adhering to guidelines.

21. If a writer doesn’t submit her own writing, she shouldn’t critique another’s work.

22. Enjoy the experience! This is a time to admire and respect your peers.

I treasure the friendship of my critique partners. We pray and play together, which ensures our friendships are mentally and spiritually rewarding.

What tips can you offer for a successful critique group? Feel free to leave a comment below.


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DiAnn Mills is a bestselling author who believes her readers should expect an adventure. Her titles have appeared on the CBA and ECPA bestseller lists; won two Christy Awards; and been finalists for the RITA, Daphne Du Maurier, Inspirational Readers’ Choice, and Carol award contests. Library Journal presented her with a Best Books 2014: Genre Fiction award in the Christian Fiction category for Firewall.

DiAnn is a founding board member of the American Christian Fiction Writers, a member of Advanced Writers and Speakers Association, Suspense Sister, and International Thriller Writers. She is co-director of The Blue Ridge Mountain Christian Writers Conference and The Author Roadmap with social media specialist Edie Melson. She teaches writing workshops around the country. DiAnn is active online and would love to connect with readers on any of the social media platforms listed at

Be sure to check out her newest title, Deadly Encounter. Available now.