9 Tips to Get an Editor to Say Yes
Today we'd like to welcome guest blogger Bethany Jett to The Write Editing! Enjoy!
by Bethany Jett @BetJett
by Bethany Jett @BetJett
Your writing is
strengthened through editing, and editing other people’s work strengthens your
writing.
All through school I wanted
my papers to be perfect the first time, and rarely did I write a second draft.
My undergrad nights were often spent hunched over a keyboard, writing a
twelve-page paper that was due the next day. No time for proofreading. No time
for rewriting. No room for error.
Which of course, is the
worst way to write papers.
I hated the red ink, which
translates to “I hated correction.” Yet this type of correction is something I
now crave, and as Stephen King says in my favorite writing book On Writing,
“The first draft is for you. The second draft should be for everyone else.”
Apologies to my professors for submitting the completely raw versions.
If you want to grow as a
writer, pay attention to the edits. Learn from your mistakes and don’t make
them again. It’s the red ink that strengthens and grows our writing abilities,
and by editing other people’s work, you reinforce the rules in your own mind.
After working as Web
Content Editor for Splickety Publishing Group, I read through numerous short
stories, and my own writing was strengthened. I’d like to share with you some
tips so that you can self-edit your manuscript before submitting it, and be
that much more likely to get an editor to say yes.
1. Start with a hook.
Grab your reader from
beginning. Unless it’s crucial to your story, no one cares that your heroine is
blonde or tan. No one cares about the backstory. Strong openings show tension,
so jump right into the middle of your character’s lives and draw your reader in
to their world.
2. Cut every non-essential
word, including descriptors.
Some words to look for: just,
so, very, anyway, well. Get rid of them!
3. Be specific.
Look for the words they,
it, them, thing, we, she, and he. When you have the chance to be
specific, do so. Instead of saying, “He picked it up,” say “Caleb snatched the
vase.”
4. Show, don’t tell.
This is a big one. It’s
such an overused “rule” of writing but it’s so easy to slip into a narrative.
Anton Chekhov said “Don't tell me the moon is
shining; show me the glint of light on broken glass.”
5. Don’t repeat words that
are close together.
This rule includes starting
your sentences with the same word. If you scan your paragraphs, does each one
start with “The” or “I”? Switch it up. If your characters are in a coffee shop,
use synonyms—mug, thermos, coffee cup, tumbler, espresso.
6. Pace your reader.
Use punctuation and white
space to control the flow of the story. Your writing should have a rhythm.
Choose words that match the beat you hear in your mind as you write. If it’s a
fast-paced section, use choppier sentences.
Break. It. Up.
If it’s a slower scene, use
softer phrases and extend your sentences by making them longer than needed so
that you are in control of the pace.
7. Utilize the senses.
Your reader sees the world
through the eyes of the character (or the author, in the case of nonfiction).
Open the rest of the senses…what does the barn smell like? How does the fabric
feel against her cheek? Is tea warm in her mouth or does it scald her lips?
Remind your reader what it sounds like to put your ear against the heartbeat of
your true love.
8. Read your work out loud,
then let someone else read it.
I believe in printing out
your manuscript and reading it from a hard copy after you’ve worked tirelessly
on it with your computer. On the screen, you may see zero mistakes. As soon as
you hit print, they become glaringly obvious.
It’s also important to let
someone read your work. Make sure this person will tell you the truth about
your writing. I want to know if I’m being funny at the right time, if my jokes
are “hitting,” if my pacing is good, and if I’m able to pull my reader through
an emotional experience. This is what I’m looking for with my first reader. My
second reader is my editor and I’m looking for correction with grammar and
punctuation.
9. Follow submission
guidelines.
There is too much
competition and you’ve worked too hard to have your manuscript rejected because
you couldn’t follow the rules. When in doubt, follow the standard: 12-pt Times
New Roman font, double-spaced, with 1”-margins.
I wish you all the best in
your writing journey!
Bethany Jett attended her first writers conference with
a proposal and a prayer and left with the Writer of the Year award, an
agency contract, and interest from multiple publishers.
Three months later, she sold her debut book The Cinderella Rule: a Young Woman’s Guide to Happily Ever After (Revell), which became
a Selah Awards finalist.
Bethany is the Founder and Co-Owner of Serious Writer,
Inc., and Vice President of Platinum Literary Services where she specializes in
marketing, nonfiction proposal creation, ghostwriting, and developmental
editing. Her love for marketing and social media led to her pursuing her Master
of Fine Arts degree in Communication: New Media and Marketing. She also holds a
degree in Interdisciplinary Studies: Behavioral Social Science and Humanities
with a Criminal Justice minor.
Along with her speaking, writing, and graduate studies,
Bethany speaks at churches and conferences nationwide at women’s and youth
conferences and retreats, and her work has been featured in numerous
publications including ChristianityToday.com,
Focus on the Family’s Clubhouse Jr., SpiritLedWoman.com, crosswalk.com, SonomaChristianHome.com, ChristianMingle.com, the Rave section of The
Orlando Sentinel, and Splickety Publishing Group.
Bethany
is a military spouse, momma-of-boys, suspense-novel junkie who describes
herself as “mid-maintenance” and loves cute shoes and all things girly. Connect
with her at BethanyJett.com.
Great tips, Bethany. Welcome to the Write Editing! :)
ReplyDeleteI am going to share this post with some writer friends. It is so obvious yet we all stumble in at least one of these areas. It's so easy to accept the red ink, fix the manuscript and not learn from your errors. After all isn't it the editors job to fix it. Thanks for the great list Bethany.
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